The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data.

The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data.
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The comparison among six varieties of financial requirements, encompassing books, computers, furniture, restaurants, petrol, cars, and food, being engaged in UK citizen activities between 1971 and 2001 is presented in the pie chart.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that people's primary needs have changed over the years.
In addition
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, there was an upward and downward trend, which was proved by the number of cars and food. On the one hand, there was an upward trend that involved cars, restaurants, and computers in the period. Surprisingly, computer demands rocketed from 2% to 12% of the budget from 1971 to 2001,
while
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the former and the ladder increased extremely halved for 30 years.
On the other hand
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, it coincided with the rest of them, which tended to decline in 2001.
In addition
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, the percentage of food and books went downhill by approximately 90% and 5%, respectively,
while
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furniture and petrol decreased minimally by 1% versus 2%
at the end
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of the period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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