the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particulat carribean island between 2010 and 2017. summarise the informattion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particulat carribean island between 2010 and 2017. summarise the informattion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The line graph represents the change in the
number
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of tourists who travelled to a Caribbean
island
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in the seven-year period from 2010 to 2017. It measured in millions of
visitors
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.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of
visitors
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to the Caribbean
island
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increased. In the beginning,
visitors
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preferred to stay on the
island
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. By the end of the period,
visitors
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preferred to stay on
cruise
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ships. In 2010, the
number
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of
visitors
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who stayed on the
island
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was triple that of the
visitors
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who stayed on
cruise
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ships. It remained constant in 2011 (0.75 million). It rose to double in the next two years and plateaued from 2013 to 2015. It dropped 0.25 million in 2016 and recovered in 2017.
Cruise
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ship's options climbed gradually reaching 2 million in 2017
while
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decreasing in 2012 and growing steadily since 2013. In 2016,
visitors
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who stay on
cruise
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ships surpassed the
number
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of
visitors
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who stay on the
island
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.
Consequently
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, the
cruise
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ship option is preferable to staying on the
island
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, visitors, cruise with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 6 times.
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