the line graph shows the amount of fastfood consumed by astrutalian teeagaer from 1975 to 2000

the line graph shows the amount of fastfood consumed by astrutalian teeagaer from 1975 to 2000
The line graph depicts the
numner
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number
of times per year a teenager
spend
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in Australia
to eat
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junkfood
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junk food
from 1975 to 2000.
Overall
, It can be seen that consumption of
hamburgers
and pizza increases significantly,
while
decreases for fish and chips. In
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year 1975, figures for pizza and
hamburgers
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started
start
at around 10 times per year.
However
,
popularity
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the popularity
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of
hamburgers
inclined
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increased
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swiftly and reached over 80 in 1985, and remained constant after reaching
it's
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peak at 100 in 1995 till 2000. For
hamburgers
, the
firgures
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figures
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grew slightly around 30 in 1985 before inclining drastically to just over 80
in
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from
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1995 to 2000.
On the other hand
, The prominent of fish and chips showed
fluctuiations
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fluctuation
in
first
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the first
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10 years. The number started at 100 in 1975 and fell to
near
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nearly
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80 in
next
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five years. After that,
number
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the number
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reached just under 100 in 1985 and again started to decrease
continpusly untill
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continuously until
it reached 39
at the end
of the given period.
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