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Some people believe that using a bicycle as main from of transportation has a lot of advantages, whereas others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is no doubt that using transportation namely
bicycle
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a bicycle
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 helps in many ways
such
 as
reduce
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reducing
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 the
emmision
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emission
emissions
 of fossil fuels into the atmosphere and
and
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improve one's physical health.
However
, some arguments
are
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among the public
thinks
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think
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 that it has many demerits.In the next paragraph , I will
dicuss
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discuss
on
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both views and provide my own opinion.
To begin
 with,
by
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 using a bicycle as our main form of transportation
is
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surely
have
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has
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 some advantages.First,in
this
 new era compared to the past decade , our air is
no
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not
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 as clean as
to
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in
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 the past
that
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as
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 can be seen through the data that have
being
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been
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 collected by the researchers.
For example
,
due to
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large amounts of carbon
emmisions
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emissions
of
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from
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 cars and other vehicles have
lead
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 to air pollution and global warming.
In addition
,
this
 can help to reduce air pollution
to
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in
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 the world.Next,
no
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not
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 to mention,
this
 can
also
 help to build one's strength by cycling to other destinations because cycling is
physical
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a physical
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 exercise that
required
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requires
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 good stamina.
Hence
,
this
 can lower the rates of traffic congestion and
cost-effective
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be cost-effective
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.
For example
,
bicycle
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the bicycle
a bicycle
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 has lower maintenance fees compared to other
vechicles
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vehicles
.
On the other hand
,there are
also
 some disadvantages of
this
trends
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trend
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 which
involving
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involve
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 the safety of
the
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apply
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cyclists.There is no guarantee for
the
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bicyclists to
cycling
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cycle
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 in
the
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a
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 safe environment if the distance and the weather are harsh.
For example
, cars are more suitable for
traveling
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travelling
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in
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apply
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long
distance
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distances
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 and
safest
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are safest
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 during
raining
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rainy
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day
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days
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. In conclusion, In my opinion, the phenomenon of the merits far outweigh the drawbacks , especially considering the urgent need for
environment
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environmental
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 awareness and
health
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the health
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 benefits of cycling.I believe that with help from the government and
public
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the public
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 by investing
proper
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in proper
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infrastruture
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infrastructure
 and safety measures,the disadvantages can be prevented.
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Structure
Ensure to have a well-structured essay with clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The introduction should provide a brief overview of the topic and your position. Each body paragraph should focus on a single main point, supported with examples or explanations. Conclude by summarizing the main points and stating your opinion firmly.
Coherence
To improve coherence, make use of linking words to smoothly transition between ideas and sentences within paragraphs. This enhances the flow of information and keeps the reader engaged throughout the essay.
Example Relevance
Increase the depth and variety of your examples to better illustrate your points. While the provided examples are relevant, offering more detailed or diverse instances can enhance the persuasive power of your argument. Consider drawing from a wider range of sources or hypothetical situations to strengthen your case.
Grammar and Spelling
Watch out for spelling and grammatical mistakes. Errors such as 'emmision' instead of 'emission', 'dicuss' instead of 'discuss', and misuse of commas and periods can distract the reader and impact the clarity of your message. Regular proofreading and practice can help minimize these errors.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon emissions
  • motorized vehicles
  • traffic congestion
  • cost-effective
  • sense of community
  • harsh weather conditions
  • road accidents
  • physical disabilities
  • sustainable practices
  • health benefits
  • infrastructure
  • feasible option
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