The graph below shows the information about money spent in three European countries between 1960 and 2000
The chart given
displayed
the Verb problem
shows
proportion
of spending from three European Nations from 1960 to 2000.
In general, it can be identified that the proportion
of spending is decreasing for food
, leisure
, clothing, and fuel. On the contrary
, it is the expense
of transport that keeps increasing year
after year
.
People used to allocate most of their funds to food
. It was not until the year
2000 that transport demanded a greater proportion
of cost compared to food
, about 20% of total expenditure.
It is also
indicated that there is a decrease in spending proportions for leisure
and clothing. Leisure
used to take almost 20% of total spending and clothing took around 10%. On the contrary
, the most recent data showed that expense
on leisure
only accounts for around 10% of all spending and clothing spending accounts for 5%.
Another point worth mentioning is the spending of energy. Although
it has a similar trend of decrease, the difference is not significant. It only takes around 5% of total expenses in 1960 and after 40 years, the expense
share only falls to around 3%.
In conclusion, spending proportion
on food
, leisure
, clothing, and energy have
been decreasing from 1960 to 2000. It was only transportation spending that kept increasing until it became the main source of Change the verb form
has
expense
in the year
2000.Submitted by aqilahanifah22 on
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