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Writing Samples
Band 2

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. write at least 250 words.

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
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Nowadays technology has been
developed
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 rapidly, it's
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 impacted to reading
habit
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habits
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to
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all of people around the world. In the early 2000th the parents used to read
the
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newspapers and
magazine
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magazines
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, but
then
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 in 2015
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they
have been reading
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read
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 by phone or laptop.
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 many people start reading online,
i
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 don't
totaly
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totally
 agree with the
statemant
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statement
due to
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 some factors. Book is the
world
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 key and it has
contribute
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 to
improve
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the
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knowledge. Reading by phone or laptop usually
have
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has
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 some
of
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distructions
such
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 as
the
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massage
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message
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notification
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notifications
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, advertising, social media and others.
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 those
distruction
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destruction
, the convenience of wearing the hard file of
books
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are
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 doubtless. For
the
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example reading
the
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physical
books
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 means that student will
be focus
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be focused
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 on their learning
istead
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instead
 of their notifications.
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addition
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 some of country haven't
the
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good
facility
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facilities
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 to support online reading
and
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without
books
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.
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, the hard file of
book
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a book
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 wouldn't be
relaced
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replaced
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 by phone or laptop, because it will give us focus, no
distuction
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destruction
distractions
distraction
, without internet and higher facility.
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 fact that, by hard file of
books
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student
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students
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 or society could read anywhere and ease.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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