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Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Today airbuses are highly active
exchanging
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 products to places where they cannot be grown or run out of the period.
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 essay will discuss the benefits of consuming
produces
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 from where it is cultivated by air shipping
nevertheless
 fast air transport is quite expensive. One of the major advantages
exporting
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 fruits and vegetables by plane from other nations
,
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 is using
wider
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 range of
product
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 fresh whole year. Many countries are only able to produce certain fruits during specific
season
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 so without import it is not possible to consume foods whenever.
Moreover
, imported produce is
needfull
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needful
 for survival in some countries.
This
 is because their inhospitable condition
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 not allow
to
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 grow sufficient food.
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, mostly desert and cold regions like Africa and some cities
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 Russia One of the main drawbacks of air transportation is
high
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 cost. As fast service and fuel
costs
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 lots of money
this
is makes
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 more expensive to deliver it,
this
 could be
result
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the result
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 of avoiding v+v? purchase them. There are many fruits
such
 as watermelon and grapes which are not affordable for some people on
daily
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 basis. As an example, in summer, local watermelon is 10 times cheaper than in winter In conclusion, some cons
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using
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 airlift cargo
is
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 making opportunity to eat plenty of goods throughout the year second side of the coin is including
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surcharged
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 rate of purchase of
such
 goods.
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task achievement
Be clear and concise in your introduction. Instead of general statements, directly address the topic and outline your essay's structure.
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Include a more detailed discussion of the advantages and disadvantages with specific examples to strengthen your argument.
coherence cohesion
Transition smoothly between ideas and paragraphs to enhance the flow of your essay. Use linking words effectively.
coherence cohesion
In your conclusion, summarise your main points more clearly to reinforce your argument and provide a more satisfying closure.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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