There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, - Describe the construction - Explain why the construction is a problem for you - Say what you would like them to do about it
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter to inform you
a
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complain
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complaint
of
the construction that Change preposition
about
are
disturbing my family when they do their construction close to my home. I live at 10 Lochoel avenue Naracoorte.
I Change the verb form
is
apologies
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apologise
to say
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for saying
this
words Correct determiner usage
these
however
i
just really want them to do their job because they are building one of our community Change the capitalization
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hall
.
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halls
issues
that Fix the agreement mistake
issue
i
face now is thatChange the capitalization
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,
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have my little baby she is two months old and Change the capitalization
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i
do not want her to wake up by the sound of Change the capitalization
I
mechinery
from the construction sites. Plus my wife needs more time to rest and every time when she wakes up by Correct your spelling
machinery
this
sound, she will never go to sleep again til evening.
Therefore
, I would like them if you are agree
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agree
on
my terms.
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to
Firstly
, i
really want them to work at noon Change the capitalization
I
instead
of early morning. Not only that but if they can work also
during weekend
. I Add an article
the weekend
always
away from home and Add a missing verb
am always
i
come back on Change the capitalization
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sunday
.
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Sunday
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very appreciate Verb problem
would
if
you could help me on Correct pronoun usage
it if
this
matter.
Let me know if you want to talk with me by this
phone number 0402175902.
Yours sincerely,
Tokateti TotokiSubmitted by riemwatokateti on
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task achievement
Ensure your letter addresses all prompts fully, providing sufficient detail for each. While your letter mentions the construction, its impact, and a proposed solution, expanding on these aspects could enhance task completion.
task achievement
In your introduction, clearly state the purpose of your letter and the issue at hand for immediate clarity. This sets an appropriate tone and aids task achievement.
task achievement
Employ a more formal tone by avoiding colloquial language ('I apologies to say this words') and aiming for correct spelling and grammar throughout. This adjustment will make your writing more suitable for its intended audience and purpose, improving writing tone.
coherence cohesion
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, with each focusing on a specific aspect of your complaint. A logical flow from describing the problem, to explaining its impact, to suggesting solutions, will enhance coherence and cohesion.
coherence cohesion
Use transitional phrases between paragraphs to guide the reader smoothly from one point to the next, reinforcing the logical structure of your letter.
coherence cohesion
Closing your letter with a polite request or expression of gratitude ('I would appreciate your attention to this matter') can strengthen the greeting and closing aspects of your letter, making it more formally appropriate.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.