The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land became less productive. the table shows how these causes affected 3 regions of the world during the 1990 S.
The first chart displays the major causes of global
land
degradation
. The second graph, how three regions of the world were affected by deforestation
, over-cultivation
, and over-grazing in the 1990s is depicted. Overall
, the main reasons for worldwide land
degradation
were allocated to over-grazing, deforestation
, and over-cultivation
respectively. Moreover
, Europe had the highest share of farmland declaration than other regions.
According to
the first chart, the biggest reason for global land
decoration was devoted to our grazing, which is 35 percent
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per cent
Moreover
, 30 and 28 % of the world's degraded land
accounted for deforestation
and over-cultivation
, respectively, while
that of other firm land
decoration, which is not clearly specified (7%).
The second graph shows Europe had the greatest proportion of degradation
Replace the word
degraded
land
during the 1990s,at 23%, and the main causes there were deforestation
(approximately 10%) and over-cultivation
(about 8%). In contrast
, North America had a lower proportion of land
degradation
at merely 5%, and the major reason for this
were
3.3%, to a lesser extent over-grazing (1.5%). Despite the fact that Change the verb form
was
the
over-grazing played the main role in Correct article usage
apply
land
degradation
in Oceania, which was 11.3%; over-cultivation
had no contribution to land
degraded
.Replace the word
degradation
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