The diagram shows how ethanol produced from corn
This
graph illustrates the process of producing ethanol fuel which is made of corn
. Overall
, there are apparently three main parts, starting with storing and milling, followed by dividing into liquid and solid substances, and then
the final dealing with transporting.
Firstly
, corn
is milled after storing it for a period, and then
is cooked with water. Following on, the corn
was cooked for 4 hours, and put down for fermenting in 48 hours. Subsequently
, in the separating stage, it is going to be divided into solid and liquid. The former are by-products, but the latter need more steps to deal with.
Next in the 7th process, it can be observed that purifying the liquid of corn
for generating Ethanol expenses 5 hours. Following
this
, the corn
is formed as the ultimate product and stored. Moving forward to the final stages, the completed products of ethanol fuel will be transported to use.Submitted by J.C.Li.1997.11 on
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