The pie charts compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.

The pie charts compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.
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The pie charts provide information about residential, industrial, and agricultural
water
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usage in
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Diego
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,
California
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, and
the
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other parts of the world.
Overall
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, it can be observed that in
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Diego
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and
California
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, the largest proportions of
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are used for residential purposes. In comparison, around the world, agriculture accounts for the highest consumption of
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. In detail, in
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Diego
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, three-fifths of
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is consumed by residents
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California
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's population use around two-fifths of
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. In terms of agriculture, there are similarities: in both countries, agricultural use of
water
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constitutes the smallest fractions (17% in
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Diego
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and 28% in
California
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). In the industrial sector,
California
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's
water
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usage makes up a third of the proportion and 10% more than
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Diego
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's industry. As far as
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is concerned across the world, just above two-thirds of
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is spent on agriculture
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residential usage of
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comprises slightly less than one in ten per cent of
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.
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, like the two countries, the industry is in the middle of
water
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spending(8%) worldwide.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, san, diego, california with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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