The pie charts compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.

The pie charts compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.
The pie charts provide information about residential, industrial, and agricultural
water
usage in
San
Diego
,
California
, and
the
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other parts of the world.
Overall
, it can be observed that in
San
Diego
and
California
, the largest proportions of
water
are used for residential purposes. In comparison, around the world, agriculture accounts for the highest consumption of
water
. In detail, in
San
Diego
, three-fifths of
water
is consumed by residents
while
California
's population use around two-fifths of
water
. In terms of agriculture, there are similarities: in both countries, agricultural use of
water
constitutes the smallest fractions (17% in
San
Diego
and 28% in
California
). In the industrial sector,
California
's
water
usage makes up a third of the proportion and 10% more than
San
Diego
's industry. As far as
water
is concerned across the world, just above two-thirds of
water
is spent on agriculture
whereas
residential usage of
water
comprises slightly less than one in ten per cent of
water
.
Similarly
, like the two countries, the industry is in the middle of
water
spending(8%) worldwide.
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