The chart below provides information about computer possesstion with difference educational level between 2002 and 2010
The bar charts show data about data processor
ownership
, with a further
classification by level of education
, from 2002 to 2010.
A steady but significant rise can be seen in the percentage of the population that owned a computer
over the period. Just over half the population owned computers in 2002, whereas
by 2010 three out of four people had a home computer
.
An analysis of the data by level of education
shows that higher levels of education
correspond to higher levels of computer
ownership
in both of those years. In 2002, only around 15% of those who did not finish high school had a computer
but this
figure had trebled by 2010. There were also
considerable increases, of approximately 30 percentage points, for those with a high school diploma or an unfinished college education
(reaching 65% and 85% respectively in 2010). However
, graduates and postgraduates proved to have the greatest level of ownership
in 2010, at 90% and 95% respectively, 20 percentage points higher than in 2002. The last
decade has seen a substantial growth in computer
ownership
in general,
and across all educational levels.Remove the comma
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ownership, education, computer with synonyms.
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