The chart below provides information about computer possesstion with difference educational level between 2002 and 2010

The chart below provides information about computer possesstion with difference educational level between 2002 and 2010
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The bar charts show data about data processor
ownership
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, with a
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classification by level of
education
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, from 2002 to 2010. A steady but significant rise can be seen in the percentage of the population that owned a
computer
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over the period. Just over half the population owned computers in 2002,
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by 2010 three out of four people had a home
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. An analysis of the data by level of
education
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shows that higher levels of
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correspond to higher levels of
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ownership
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in both of those years. In 2002, only around 15% of those who did not finish high school had a
computer
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but
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figure had trebled by 2010. There were
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considerable increases, of approximately 30 percentage points, for those with a high school diploma or an unfinished college
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(reaching 65% and 85% respectively in 2010).
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, graduates and postgraduates proved to have the greatest level of
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in 2010, at 90% and 95% respectively, 20 percentage points higher than in 2002. The
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decade has seen a substantial growth in
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ownership
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in general
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and across all educational levels.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ownership, education, computer with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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