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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart tells us about the
household
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 numbers in 2007, 2011, and 2015 categorized by their annual
income
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. The annual
income
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 is separated into five
categorize
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categories
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,
that is
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 less than $25,000, $25,000-$49,999, $50,000-$74,999, $75,000-$99,999, and $100,000 or more. The
number
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 of
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household
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households
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 with annual
income
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 of less than $25,000 was increasing in 2011 and slightly reduced in 2015. The same trend went for
households
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 with
annual
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an annual
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income
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 of %25,000-$49,999. The
number
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 o
f
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households
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household
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 in the third category remained stagnant in 2007, 2011, and 2015 at 2
1 millio
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million
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ns
households
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. Th
e
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apply
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number
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 of fourth category of
household
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 annual
income
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 was the lowest in 2007, 2011, and 2015 wit
h maxim
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a maximum
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um of 15 million
households
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 in 2015. In 2007 and 2015, the fifth category o
f
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households
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household
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 by annual
income
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 was the highest in
numb
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er wi
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apply
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th. It exceede
d
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the
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 a
number
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 of 30 million
households
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 in 2015 and was
also
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 the highest
number
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 in all o
f 20
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the 2007
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07, 2011, and 2015 data.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, income, number, households with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • households
  • income distribution
  • peak
  • rise
  • fall
  • stable
  • significant
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
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