The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart tells us about the
household
numbers in 2007, 2011, and 2015 categorized by their annual income
. The annual income
is separated into five categorize
, Replace the word
categories
that is
less than $25,000, $25,000-$49,999, $50,000-$74,999, $75,000-$99,999, and $100,000 or more. The number
of household
with annual Change to a plural noun
households
income
of less than $25,000 was increasing in 2011 and slightly reduced in 2015. The same trend went for households
with annual
Add an article
an annual
income
of %25,000-$49,999. The number
of
Change to a plural noun
households
household
in the third category remained stagnant in 2007, 2011, and 2015 at 21 millio
ns Change to singular
million
households
. The
Correct quantifier usage
apply
number
of fourth category of household
annual income
was the lowest in 2007, 2011, and 2015 with maxim
um of 15 million Add an article
a maximum
households
in 2015. In 2007 and 2015, the fifth category of
Fix the agreement mistake
households
household
by annual income
was the highest in numb
er wi
th. It exceedeChange preposition
apply
d
a Change the article
the
number
of 30 million households
in 2015 and was also
the highest number
in all of 20
07, 2011, and 2015 data.Correct article usage
the 2007
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