Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common view that only big corporations and governments have resources to reverse the harmful
effects
caused to our environment
and individual effort
cannot make a big difference. However
, this
essay strongly disagrees with this
viewpoint and suggests that individuals can make a huge impact in improving the environment
through their small individual actions as well as
with their collective effort
.
To begin
with, very small steps taken towards preserving nature
can have many positive effects
in the long run. There are many small things that we can do to protect nature
, for instance
, reducing the usage of single-use plastic, planting more trees, using public transportation for our daily commute, not using air conditioners while
windows are open, etc. All these actions yield many benefits to our environment
in the long run.
Furthermore
, a group of individuals who are well aware of the future outcomes of our actions which can badly affect the environment
, can make others aware of them. To explain further
, the primary reason why people take steps that negatively impact our surrounding is their lack of awareness. Additionally
, individuals who are very passionate about preserving our mother nature
can also
run non-profit organizations to solve the specific cause. For example
, one of these organizations, named Seva, runs awareness campaigns for students to teach them the adverse effects
of using plastic on the environment
.
In conclusion, tiny steps taken towards improving the environment
have a huge impact on the future, and a single individual effort
also
matters when it comes to protecting Mother Nature
. Moreover
, the collective effort
of making others aware of the negative effects
of their action on the environment
can have very positive outcomes in the future.Submitted by aayushvsanghvi8 on
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