The map show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The map illustrates changes which took place in Bell Hill farm between the years of 1976 and Bell Hill environment centre in 2006.
Overall
, it is evident that Bell Hill farm used to have an ordinary design with Linking Words
barn
, cow sheds, farmyard and storage which became more sophisticated in terms of Correct article usage
a barn
recreational
with the facilities of parking, multimedia room, student housing and recreation area.
On the whole, in 2006, Replace the word
recreation
multimedia
room replaced Correct article usage
the multimedia
barn
which included corn and other products in 1976. Another significant change is that, in 1976, there was a cow Correct article usage
the barn
sheds
located in the left corner of Change the noun form
shed
map
and in 2006 student housing replaced its place. Add an article
the map
In addition
, Linking Words
farmyard
was demolished, and its placeCorrect article usage
the farmyard
a
recreational area was constructed. Towards the right side, storage for farm machinery transformed into Change preposition
as a
a
vehicle parking. Correct article usage
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Finally
, we can observe thatLinking Words
,
the farmhouse in the bottom and road in the bottom left of the map did not go through any changes.
(161 words)Remove the comma
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