The civic centre will be planned to change. There are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for new. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and compare the two maps.

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The two maps

illustrates

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illustrate

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the changes that need to be made in

civic

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the civic

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centre

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. The first map shows the present status of the civic

centre

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and the second map shows the proposed future developments. The overarching plan entails a transformation of

this

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civic

centre

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into an entertainment place including

theatre

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a theatre

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, hotel and restaurant, open

park

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, and underground car

park

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According to

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the second map, the car parking in the upper left

corner

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will be demolished and a theatre will be built in its place. The car

park

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in the right

corner

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will be converted into

hotel

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a hotel

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and Restaurant. The library will be removed and the exhibition hall will move from the lower left

corner

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to the lower right

corner

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. The most notable information involves replacing the existing Council office with

exhibition

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an exhibition

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hall. It is planned that

instead

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council

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the council

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office, open

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park

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parking

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and underground parking will be constructed.

Lastly

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, most of the area in

civic

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the civic

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centre

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undergo

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has undergone

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modification except the concert hall and shopping

centre

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, park, corner with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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