In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside thes vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many companies have initiated the manufacturing of driverless automobiles. So, pretty soon we will be seeing cars, buses, and trucks being self-driven.
This
has both
advantages and disadvantages attached to it. This
essay discusses both
sides and concludes with an opinion choosing one.
Firstly
, when we say that vehicles
will be operating without drivers
, this
implies that there will be no maintenance of records by the State, as it
will be of no use. Correct pronoun usage
they
Additionally
, there is no need to waste the state's resources in monitoring drivers
. For instance
, a city has police that issue fines to those who do not obey laws, wasting both
the time of courts and police. Moreover
, if vehicles
are self-driven, it will also
prevent reckless and impaired driving, which endangers the lives of both
drivers
and pedestrians. Additionally
, passengers will have time that they could
utilize productively for virtual meetings, office work, rest, and other activities. Wrong verb form
can
This
will also
benefit them economically, as driving wastes a lot of time that could be used for work.
On the other hand
, relying on machinery to operate itself, especially when you have to put your life on the line, is very risky and not worth it. For example
, consider the company "Tesla," which specializes in making self-driven automobiles. Their cars have recently been involved in accidents, leading to loss of lives because people were not paying enough attention and relied entirely on the machine to operate by itself. Furthermore
, it is not right to rely on artificial intelligence like this
, as it could make us lazy. Cars, buses, and trucks have been made much easier to operate than before. Earlier, gears used to be manual, but now they are automatic. We have automatic headlight sensors, wiper sensors, and many more functions that make driving easier. However
, giving that responsibility entirely to machines will lead to fatigue.
In conclusion, although
technology is improving day by day, and there will be a point when vehicles
would
be driverless, I believe that there should not be so much reliance on machinery to put our lives in danger. Wrong verb form
will
Therefore
, vehicles
should not be made to operate without drivers
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task response
Try to directly address the question asked by clearly stating if the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or not. This will strengthen your argument and make your essay more persuasive.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas more effectively by clearly separating them into paragraphs. Each paragraph should contain one main idea supported by examples or further explanation.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to use a range of linking words to help the reader follow your arguments. This will also show a high level of English language proficiency.
task response
Be more specific in your examples. Provide real-life situations or hypothetical scenarios that vividly illustrate your points. This will add depth to your argument and make it more convincing.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?