The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.
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The chart illustrates information about emigration by
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people from 2004 until 2007, to the following countries
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as Australia, New Zealand, France, Spain and the USA. To
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with, it is noticeable, that Australia was the main option for emigrants and New Zealand was preferred by the lowest number of people. The number one choice - Australia gradually rose from 39
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in 2005 to over 50 in 2006.
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Spain had pretty same data for three years in a row, but accidentally
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to 37 in 2007. The common situation happened to
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of the USA,
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country had its own ups and downs in numbers during
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period of time.
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, movement to New Zealand was the slowest and the smallest,
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other lands, their point
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much changed from 23 to 20
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.
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, resettlement to France increased to position 34 in the year
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2005 and
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, suddenly decreased to less than 20 in 2007.
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