The he table and charts below give nformation on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. I'he table shows where the money came From and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main Features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The he table and charts below give

 nformation on the police budget for

 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.

 I'he table shows where the money came

 From and the charts show how it was

 distributed.

 Summarise the information by

 selecting and reporting the main

 Features, and make comparisons where

 relevant.
The table and piecharts contain information about
income
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and expenses of the police in a particular region of Britain in the years 2017 and 2018. The table illustrates
sources
of budget,
while
the diagrams compare percentages of expenditures on various categories.
Overall
, there was an increase in all
sources
of revenue, with the most significant growth related to the national government and the least for the other
sources
.
Although
the proportion of the spent money on
the
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salaries decreased, that of technology increased and
for
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the
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building and transport remained unchanged. The revenue from the local taxes experienced a significant surge of about 11million (11m).
However
, the national government and the other
sources
showed a marginal rise from 175.5 to 177.8 and 38m to 38.5m, respectively.
As a result
, the total substantially rose by approximately 14m.
Initially
, the proportion of allocated funds for salaries was 75%. It had dropped to 69% by 2018. But, there was a growth of 6% to 14% in expenditure on technology.
Also
, the share of building and transport remained stable at 17%.
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