The chart below shows the results survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart illustrates the outcomes of a survey about individual
coffee
and tea buying and drinking habits in Sydney, Melbourne
, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
Overall
, the highest rate in Melbourne
was of those going to a café for coffee
and tea, whereas
the lowest rate was of those having fresh coffee
in Brisbane. On the other hand
, people going to café increased sharply in Hobart, while
the rate of those having fresh coffee
decreased significantly in the same city.
Looking at the details, although
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ratio
of people visiting a café was the highest one in Melbourne
, at approximately 63%, whereas
the ratio
of those having fresh coffee
was the lowest one in Melbourne
, at nearly 43%. On the other hand
, the percentage of those having instant
coffee
was about 48%. After a modest drop in the ratio
of those buying fresh coffee
, the buying fresh coffee
proportion decreased sharply while
the instant
coffee
jumped gradually from nearly 48% to 53% in Melbourne
and Brisbane.
Looking at more details, Can see that the percentage of those having instant
coffee
was almost 46 per cent in Sydney . On the contrary
, the percentage of those having fresh coffee
was almost 34% in Adelaide. In addition
to that, the ratio
of people having instant
coffee
was exactly 50 per cent in Adelaide.Submitted by waell12 on
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