The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduates degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduates degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart given illustrates a number of things Anthropology graduation students did after completing their studies in
this
field. The table below
also
depicts their income after five years of working as a freelance consultant in, the government sector, and in private companies.
Overall
, it is noticeable from the chart that more than half of the students got a chance to find a full-time job. The table,
furthermore
, shows that the highest-paid career for
this
field is in the government sector, with most of them making over 100,000$ after five years of
work
.
To begin
with, more than half of the number of graduates found a full-time job,
as well as
15% with part-time
work
.
However
, unfortunately, 12% were unemployed. The least amount of them with 5 percent working part-time
while
studying for their post-graduate. The table,
on the other hand
, depicts that the ones who chose to
work
in the government sector made the most money of all, with half of them making more than 100,00$ with five years of experience.
While
30% of workers who
work
for a Private company, had made the same amount of money.
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