The map shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The images demonstrate the layout of a library floor in 2001 and the transformation of it after some amendments after 8 years.
Overall
,
while
the most noticeable changes were the addition of various book collections, video resources, and some digital facilities, the layout of the area withness minimal alternations. In 2001, There were only three categories of
books
, which were fiction, self-help and history. Self-help and history
books
were situated next to each other, on the left-hand
side
of the
room
while
the fiction shelves were
at the end
of the
room
, perpendicular to them. In the middle, 8 square tables were placed in 2 rows, next to the newspapers and periodicals counter on the right
side
of the library. The librarian’s desk was opposite the entrance at the bottom, and the stairs were in the right-hand corner. After the rearrangement, the most noticeable change was the expansion of
books
in many new fields
such
as economics, law, kitchen and children’s which were located on the left-hand
side
shelves. Fictions were relocated to the left
side
to make
room
for children's
books
.
In addition
, a children’s area, which was dedicated for kids to play, was added in front of kids' shelves and all tables which were replaced by 4 large rectangular ones. On the other
side
of the
room
, film and DVD stands replaced the newspapers and periodicals. and two new computers were added next to them, near the stairs.
Finally
, the librarian’s desk, the entrance and the stairs remained unchanged.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-service machines
  • computer stations
  • digital resources
  • book sections
  • fiction, non-fiction, reference
  • café area
  • repositioned
  • user preferences
  • management strategies
  • children's area
  • youth engagement
  • educational activities
  • meeting rooms
  • collaborative spaces
  • community events
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