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the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.
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The given line graph illustrates how much quantities of goods were transported by four ways namely
Road
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, Water, Rail, and
pipeline
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 in the UK, over the period of from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the Road
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Road
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Roadway
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way
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 of
transportation
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 was the most popular than any other
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methods
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method
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.
While
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Pipeline
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 was the least popular. In detail,
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the Road
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Road
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Roadway
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way
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 of
transportation
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 was situated at around 70
million
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tonnes
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 meanwhile
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pipeline
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the pipeline
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 had only almost 2
million
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tonnes
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 in 1974.
Road
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methods
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 increased Significantly from the beginning of the
year
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 to
end
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the end
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 of the
year
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, between 70 to near go
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million
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a million
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tonnes
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-
water
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waterway
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way
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 of goods
transportation
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 had almost 39
million
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tonnes
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 meanwhile Rail ways had
at
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apply
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40
million
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tonnes
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then
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 these two
methods
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 were touched in the following
year
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, which was 40
million
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tonnes
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. There
afters
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after
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water
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waterway
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way
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 rose slightly,
at
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to
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 around 59
million
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tonnes
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 in 1982, after that, it
was remain
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remained
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 unchanged from 1982 to1994, which accounts for 59
million
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tonnes
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,
then
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 it decreased slightly by 50
million
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 and there was a rapid increase in 2002, and reached almost 62
million
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tonnes
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.
On the contrary
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, Rail
methods
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 of
transportation
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 had a fluctuation between 1978 and 200 and it
was
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apply
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reached
at the end
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 of the
year
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 40
million
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tonnes
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.
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Pipeline
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The pipeline
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 was the least
way
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 of
transportation
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, from 1974 to 2002, there was a stable fluctuation, between 2
millions
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million
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 to 20
million
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tonnes
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, pipeline, way, transportation, methods, million, tonnes, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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