the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp

arison. write at least 150 words.
The given graph illustrates how many
goods
were transported in the UK over the period of 28 years from 1974 to 2002 by modes of
transport
. Units are measured in million tonnes.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that
mode
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the mode
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of
transport
with the highest level of
goods
transported at
start
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the start
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increased throughout the period of time.
In contrast
,
pipeline
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the pipeline
a pipeline
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was the
mode
of transportation which carried the lowest level of
goods
since
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from
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the beginning to the end. In terms of the transportation
mode
with the largest
goods
carried, road started at around 70,
then
witnessed a slight growth to about 75. In the
next
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apply
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following years, the amount of
goods
transported
with
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by
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road
route
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routes
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remained stable from 1990 to 1994 at just below 80. The road route reached a peak of just under 100 in 2002. Regarding the other three modes of
transport
, the
amount
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number
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of
goods
carried by water transportation, rail route, and pipeline stood at just under 40, exactly 40, and approximately 2 respectively. The
transport
modes of water and rail rose
at the end
of the period in 2002.
However
, the
mode
of
pipeline
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the pipeline
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remained steady at precisely 20 from 1994 to 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, transport, mode with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.

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