Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solution?

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with

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health problems and

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loneliness

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older

people

in the past felt happier and healthier because they had much time to quality time with family and did some exercise as the professional said. There are some

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and

solution

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to resolve why

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it

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. The

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technology developing rapidly in the modern era. Many

people

spent

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their time mostly

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technology

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as

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task

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is increase

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unhealthy habits and feelings of

loneliness

.

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,

people

who work in front of computers become unhealthy

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because they rarely

to

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stretch or move their

body

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which can

cause

illnesses

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as heart disease and it

is makes

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people

rarely direct social interaction which can increase feelings of

loneliness

. The bad habits that impact physical and mental health should be considered by

people

to decrease the problems of

loneliness

and unhealthy bodies at the present times. Individuals should make a plan to always stretch and relax their body and

also

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conversation in real life with family or friends even easily catching up on the phone today.

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, my friends live alone in another city and she is a freelance worker who

work

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from home with overwork

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it

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makes her depressed because feels lonely and unhealthy

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she rarely

to meet

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people

and

also

rarely

to exercise

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that impacts

of

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overwork. In conclusion, the

cause

of many

people

suffering from

loneliness

and health problems is the impact of

development

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the development

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of technology in modern times.

However

,

people

should be aware of their bad habits which impact their

healthy

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health

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.