The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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line chart depicts the fugier of overseas visitors in three different areas in the period between 1987 and 2007 in a European country. It is clear from the graph that, there were increased overseas visitors for all the
coast
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,the
mountains
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and the lakes.
According to
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what is shown, the
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and the
mountains
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there was increasing of end the interval in the 2007 year,
while
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was drop by 5 per cent in the
coast
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in the 1992 year. On another hand, the
mountains
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started to increase from 1987 until 1997 by 30 %
then
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a big claim in 2002 year after that dropped significantly off the
coast
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in 2007.
To sum up
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, we could say that,there were constant overseas visitors in a European country for the
mountains
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and the lakes comparing the
coast
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coast, mountains with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuations
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • popular destination
  • significant changes
  • peak
  • trough
  • speculate
  • geopolitical events
  • attractiveness
  • positive outlook
  • challenges
  • tourism industry
  • overseas visitors
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