Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Traffic
jam is a serious problem
that commonly happens in a city
. While
some people
consider that the government should ban privately owned vehicles
in city
centres
to overcome the congestion
problem
, I side with those thinking that is
an unrealistic way to solve the problem
.
On the one hand, it could be argued that privately owned vehicles
should be banned in the centre of cities can pose two challenges. Firstly
, it can be difficult to prohibit vehicles
since nowadays there are a huge number of vehicles
. If it is forbidden, it will raise the problem
of congestion
in other areas. As a result
, the regulation will not solve the problem
but then
create the same problem
. Secondly
, when privately owned vehicles
are prohibited in city
centres
, it will raise society's revolt especially they are who live in rural areas where no public transport is available. People
will be in a hard situation as they can not go to city
centres
with their vehicles
and at the same time, they are impossible to go by public transport.
On the other hand
, I believe with those who think that ban
privately owned Replace the word
banning
vehicles
in city
centres
is an unrealistic solution. Although
that policy will reduce traffic
congestion
and air pollution significantly, the government and any other parties involved should really consider what is the main cause of congestion
in cities. In my opinion, traffic
jams happen mainly because people
already find comfort in transporting on their own. So, rather than ban the vehicles
, the government should build a convenience
public transportation that will attract Replace the word
convenient
people
to use it. If they can do that, society's habit slowly will change to prefer using public transportation since it gives them many benefits. Furthermore
, the policy of prohibiting privately owned vehicles
from operating in city
centres
is quite impossible since there is
numerous businesses that Change the verb form
are
has
their stores in the Change the verb form
have
city
. People
can find it difficult to access the stores if they can not commute easily.
In conclusion, while
forbidding privately owned vehicles
in city
centers
might reduce Change the spelling
centres
traffic
jams and air pollution, it does not solve the problems since the main causes are not well executed. Moreover
, it has more drawbacks than benefits that can we imagine. Therefore
, on balance, I remain firmly convinced that it is an unrealistic solution.Submitted by mmmuuu on
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