The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 – 2000.
The line graph
displayed
how the Verb problem
shows
birth
rates of 2 countries namely China,
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and, USA
USA
changed in 80 years which started Correct article usage
the USA
from
1920.
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in
Overall
, the birth
rate of
the US was higher than that of China in most years . It can Change preposition
in
also
be seen that these rates of both nations experienced a decrease over the period.
China’s birth
rate rose from around 10% in the 1920s to 15% in 1935. Then
it fell sharply to around 5% in both 1940 and 1945. It increased rapidly to a peak of 20% in 1950. After
this
it fell dramatically to less than 10% in 1955. Add a comma
this,
Finally
, it decrease
steadily to about 2% in 1980 and remained at Wrong verb form
decreased
this
level until 2000.
On the other hand
, the US birth
rate fluctuated at around 12% from 1920 to 1940. It decreased dramatically to under 5% in 1945. Next
it increased rapidly to a peak of about 15% in 1950. After 1950, it fell gradually to about 12% in the 1960s and around 7% or 8% during the Add a comma
Next,
last
20 years of this
period.Submitted by thuhong.68hnue on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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