The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

The chart illustrates how many social networking websites the Canadians used in 2014 and 2015.

Overall

, within these years, at least one site was used by most of the people of Canada

whereas

only five websites were used by the least.

In contrast

, the ratio of using them is almost the same regarding using no sites and two sites. In 2014 and 2015, only 2% and 4% of people used five social networking platforms respectively,

on the other hand

, a single site was used by 36% and 28% of citizens used one site in these consecutive years. In terms of visiting no websites, 22% persons of Canada did not use them in 2014

similarly

21% did not visit them in the next year.

However

, when it comes to using two of them, 23% used them in 2014 and 24% used them in 2015.

In addition

, if we look at four of them, we see a good difference. 5% was in 2104 and 8% was in the following year.

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chart overview
social networking sites
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comparison
significant changes
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multi-platform usage
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digital communication
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