A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter •Explain why you want to voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. •Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. •Give details of when you would be available for work. .
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing well, I am Mia Wan and I noticed that you are looking for a volunteer
for
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to
work
at the museum. I am writing this
letter to inform you that I am delighted to if I have a chance to take this
job.
As a part of the community, I am always thinking that I have a responsibility to serve where I live. In addition
, I can learn a lot of things such
as art or history in the museum.
The reason why I could totally fit this
work
is because I already have some experience doing unpaid jobs before. Since I was little, I have always go
to church to serve people with my father every Wrong verb form
gone
sunday
.
In the end, if I am lucky enough to get Change the capitalization
Sunday
this
job, you may concerned that my time to available to start this
job. Since it is spring break, I can usually work
every day in the morning from 9 am to 1pm. Unfortunately
I am not available Add a comma
Unfortunately,
in
every Change preposition
apply
sunday
because I have other voluntary Change the capitalization
Sunday
work
to do.
I am looking forward to your response and hope that with a good news
.
Yours faithfully,
Mia WanRemove the article
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a piece of good news
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to structure your letter appropriately with clear paragraphs for the introduction, each main point, and a conclusion.
greeting and closing
Begin with a proper salutation and end with an appropriate closing phrase, maintaining a balance between formal and friendly tones.
single idea per paragraph
Develop each main point in separate paragraphs, concentrating on one idea per paragraph to maintain clarity and cohesion.
task achievement
Expand on the reasons why you want to volunteer, providing more specific examples of how your skills would contribute to the museum's operations.
task achievement
Use a variety of sentence structures to express your ideas clearly and improve the overall readability of your letter.