A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter •Explain why you want to voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. •Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. •Give details of when you would be available for work. .

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well, I am Mia Wan and I noticed that you are looking for a volunteer

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at the museum. I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am delighted to if I have a chance to take

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job. As a part of the community, I am always thinking that I have a responsibility to serve where I live.

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, I can learn a lot of things

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as art or history in the museum. The reason why I could totally fit

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is because I already have some experience doing unpaid jobs before. Since I was little, I have always

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to church to serve people with my father every

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. In the end, if I am lucky enough to get

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job, you may concerned that my time to available to start

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job. Since it is spring break, I can usually

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every day in the morning from 9 am to 1pm.

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I am not available

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every

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because I have other voluntary

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to do. I am looking forward to your response and hope that with

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. Yours faithfully, Mia Wan

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coherence cohesion

Make sure to structure your letter appropriately with clear paragraphs for the introduction, each main point, and a conclusion.

greeting and closing

Begin with a proper salutation and end with an appropriate closing phrase, maintaining a balance between formal and friendly tones.

single idea per paragraph

Develop each main point in separate paragraphs, concentrating on one idea per paragraph to maintain clarity and cohesion.

task achievement

Expand on the reasons why you want to volunteer, providing more specific examples of how your skills would contribute to the museum's operations.

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Use a variety of sentence structures to express your ideas clearly and improve the overall readability of your letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

203 words

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