The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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The chart illustrates how many social networking websites the Canadians used in 2014 and 2015.

Overall

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, within these years, at least one site was used by most of the people of Canada

whereas

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only five websites were used by the least.

In contrast

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, the ratio of using them is almost the same regarding using no sites and two sites. In 2014 and 2015, only 2% and 4% of people used five social networking platforms respectively,

on the other hand

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, a single site was used by 36% and 28% of citizens used one site in these consecutive years. In terms of visiting no websites, 22% persons of Canada did not use them in 2014

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21% did not visit them in the next year.

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, when it comes to using two of them, 23% used them in 2014 and 24% used them in 2015.

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, if we look at four of them, we see a good difference. 5% was in 2104 and 8% was in the following year.

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social networking sites
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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

The movement of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems at both places. What are the reasons of this problem and how can it be solved?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Tourism is a modern form of colonialism. It distorts local economies, causes environmental damage, ruins the places it exploits. To what extent do you agree?