A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest possible solutions to the problem
Dear Sultan,
How is it going? I would like to
say
you that I had the same problem as you. It is Verb problem
tell
very
arduous problem to solve. As I told you I will help you to solve Add an article
a very
the very
this circumstances
.
Change the determiner
this circumstance
these circumstances
Firstly
, I was stressed about my work
, moreover
, I did not sleep well that night. But it is okay that you had this
feeling. You must to
know that everything is Change the verb form
apply
alright
just relax everything you want to solve the problem by yourself.
I would like to tell you some solutions that I did and it helped me a lot to achieve my dream Replace the word
all right
work
. What you want to do is answer some questions about your work
. For example
, is this
the work
that you are looking for? And do
you enjoy working on Correct word choice
Do
this
? When you get answers to this
questions you will feel Correct determiner usage
these
yourself
as good as Correct pronoun usage
apply
it
possible. I Correct pronoun usage
apply
glad
to help you with Add a missing verb
am glad
this
circumstance and I hope you will feel better and You will find your dream job
Your best friend BekaSubmitted by bekzhan.akynbekov on
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Task Achievement
To enhance task achievement, ensure your letter clearly addresses all three bullet points outlined in the task. In your letter, while you mention understanding the problem and suggesting solutions, more specific information on how you addressed the problem in the past could make your response more complete and relevant.
Coherence & Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, work on creating a logical flow within and across paragraphs. Your ideas should be more systematically organized, and each paragraph should focus on a single main idea. Using transitional phrases can help link sentences and paragraphs smoothly.
Language
Check your letter for grammar and spelling mistakes, as well as for informal language that might not be appropriate in a formal or semi-formal letter. This will improve the professional tone and readability.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,