Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
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people
interact with each other. These changes can be seen in many forms and I completely believe that they move towards a better improvement.
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technology
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people
communicate with each other. Today, Use synonyms
people
do not have to do face-to-face Use synonyms
communication
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, if students have a team project they do not have to endure a long trip anymore because they can do it with their own devices from the comfort of their places.
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technology
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people
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communication
as now it only takes a smartphone and a wifi connection if we want to talk with someone overseas.
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technology
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impact
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