Some people say that we should not encourage sport games among schools because they lead to competition rather than cooperation. To what extend do you agree or disagree with?
There is a hot debate over
sport
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sports
games
among schools make
students more competitive rather than Correct pronoun usage
that make
collaboration
. Many Replace the word
collaborative
people
thought
we should deter Wrong verb form
think
this events
as competitiveness Change the determiner
this event
these events
being
seen as a negative thing, I highly disagree with Wrong verb form
is
this
notion as sports
game
will bring Fix the agreement mistake
games
positive
mental attitude as the students will know how to overcome problems and solve Correct article usage
a positive
it
as a team.
Competition is needed for young Correct pronoun usage
them
people
to learn on
how to solve different problems. Change preposition
apply
Sports
is one of many ways for them to learn, for
example
they will learn to face many challenges and train for days in order to win a competition. Add a comma
example,
For example
, there are many strategies implemented when the game is running. They also
need to think creative
to beat the enemy which is sometimes they are not prepared Change the word
creatively
before hand
. Correct your spelling
beforehand
This
,
will lead them to think Remove the comma
apply
on
how to solve various issues in many situations. Change preposition
about
Therefore
, it gives them basic foundation skills to survive for
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in
their
future.
Change the word
the
In addition
, there are also
many sports
games
that need a
teamwork. Remove the article
apply
For example
, footballs
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football
,
takes many Remove the comma
apply
people
to execute different type
of strategies just to score a goal. Fix the agreement mistake
types
Thus
, the students will learn how a team works together in order to achieve the same goal which is really important for them to survive in the career world.
In conclusion, while
sports
games
indeed lead to competition for these youth, it
Correct pronoun usage
they
also
brings
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bring
utmost
important values for them. They will experience many wins and loses which is beneficial for them to learn those in order to be a good individual. Correct article usage
the utmost
Therefore
, people
need to encourage and initiate more sports
games
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in
among
schools.Change preposition
in
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