The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table illustrates the information on unemployment in England, who spent their leisure time on different types of activities
last
year.
Overall
, the data is given in percentages, and it is split into two genders, boys and girls. In general, It is obvious see
that both genders spend most of the time in the morning on job hunting and Add the particle
to see
housework
, afternoon watching TV and housework
.
Starting from the male's morning and afternoon routine. Men are more likely to shopping and job hunting in the morning, at 20% and 22% respectively. At the
noon, watching TV and gardening were the most popular things for them at nearly 15%.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, the highest rated
activities for Add a hyphen
highest-rated
women
in the morning were housework
and shopping. The percentage of women
who do housework
in the morning was astonishing, which is as twice as
the percentage of Change preposition
apply
women
who does
shopping, at 49% and 26%. Correct subject-verb agreement
do
Likewise
, housework
and shopping were still the most optional activities for women
at the
noon, at 21% and 17% respectively.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, women with synonyms.
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