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The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table illustrates the information on unemployment in England, who spent their leisure time on different types of activities
last
 year.
Overall
, the data is given in percentages, and it is split into two genders, boys and girls. In general, It is obvious
see
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 that both genders spend most of the time in the morning on job hunting and
housework
, afternoon watching TV and
housework
. Starting from the male's morning and afternoon routine. Men are more likely to shopping and job hunting in the morning, at 20% and 22% respectively. At
the
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noon, watching TV and gardening were the most popular things for them at nearly 15%.
On the other hand
, the
highest rated
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 activities for
women
 in the morning were
housework
 and shopping. The percentage of
women
 who do
housework
 in the morning was astonishing, which is as twice
as
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the percentage of
women
 who
does
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do
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 shopping, at 49% and 26%.
Likewise
,
housework
 and shopping were still the most optional activities for
women
 at
the
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noon, at 21% and 17% respectively.
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