The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
The pie chart featured above illustrates the share of transportation
use
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whereas
the table compares the proportion of factors which cause the Linking Words
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the cars in Edmonton.
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Overall
, what stands out from the diagrams is that the majority of citizens prefer to Linking Words
use
the car to commute to work, Use synonyms
while
the usage of buses and taxis rank Linking Words
last
among the four vehicles.
With regard to the first graph, it is apparent that the usage of cars has the highest share with 45%, Linking Words
while
that of LRT(Light Rail Transit) accounts for a little less than 40%. When it comes to the bus and taxis, they all together are responsible for 20% of the gross Linking Words
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of transportation.
Focusing the shift to the table, Use synonyms
it is clear that
more than half of residents opt to commute to work by car. Linking Words
In contrast
, the percentage of people who go to shopping and leisure activities by private vehicles is the same with 15%. There is little difference between the share of people who go to business institutions and taking children to school by personal vehicles, as the former accounts for 45%, the latter is lower by a margin of 5%.Linking Words
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