The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The map chart illustrates the changes of the Grange Park in two different years, 1920 and 2024. It is clear from the graph that , the water feature and the Amphitheatre of concerts have been replaced with seats and a Glasshouse in order to attract more visitors and provide a gorgeous view.
While
other elements have not changed for some purposes like the Rose Garden and the Entrance.
According to
what is shown, there were several different spots that have been demolished. For instance
, the Rose Garden was replaced with a cafe, a Pond for water plants and more free places. Furthermore
, The fountain has exchanged with a Rose garden supported by four seats specifically, in the middle of the Park.
To sum up
, we could say that, taking off the stage for musicians and getting a new stage such
as an Amphitheatre, will encourage more people to visit the park. Moreover
, the children's play area has played an essential part in the new update of the spot which will attract a significant amount of individuals who have kids.Submitted by Leb.7149 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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