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Start by clearly stating your opinion on the topic in the introduction. Make it clear whether you agree or disagree with the statement.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your essay into paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea or argument that supports your opinion.
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Provide specific examples to support your arguments. These examples make your essay more persuasive and help the reader understand your point of view.
coherence and cohesion
Use transitional phrases to connect your ideas and paragraphs smoothly. This will make your essay easier to follow and understand.
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Avoid straying off-topic. Ensure that each sentence and paragraph contribute directly to answering the essay question.
coherence and cohesion
Review and proofread your essay to correct grammatical errors and improve sentence structure.

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