Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet. How accurate is this statement? Is there any other big threat to mankind?
The phenomenon of global warming has been predicted to be the greatest threat to human beings.
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a prophecy is totally accurate because it is causing a tremendous impact on human life and another potential threat is natural disasters caused by increased geographical Linking Words
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of the globe’s substances at its core.
The climate crisis is actually causing detrimental effects on all species and getting worse with time. Recent studies revealed that Antarctica is losing ice mass at an average rate of about 150 billion tons per Use synonyms
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, adding to sea level rise which is caused by the globe’s temperate rising by 1.5 Celsius degrees in the past decades. In the next 100 years, it is anticipated that about one-fifth of the world will have been submerged in water, especially nations and regions in low altitudes. Use synonyms
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Another great danger to the existence of the human race is natural disasters from the inside Linking Words
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and caused severe damage and loss of human life.
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