Every school system in the world includes regular tests and exams, and many think that it is important for students to take lots of exams. What is your opinion?

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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

day, taking exams and tests are procedures to check the understanding of students so, several people believe that a lot of exams should be given by students. In my opinion, it is highly important that the
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system have exams during their
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because it makes it easy to compare students at their level.
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, it has some negative
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impacts

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. There are several arguments that all educational system prefers to take
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exam
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exams

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from learner because it is a big opportunity to choose their level.
Firstly
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, it is a good way to
achieves
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achieve

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the top of talented
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student
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students

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between learners so it might be easy for
education
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

learning to select the person who
are
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is

The plural verb are does not appear to agree with the singular subject the person. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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getting a higher mark among the other learners.
For example
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, in my
country
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country,

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we have
Kanko
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the Kanko

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exam
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after graduated school and the examination was taken
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

exam
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

.it is just for determining their r knowledge
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has
a
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the

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best
qualify
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qualification

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to select the difficult field.
moreover
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

,
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exam
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an exam

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is the best facility for
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the learner
a learner
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the learner
a learner

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learner
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to show their ability and skill in the academic area so it will encourage
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the student
a student
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the student
a student

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student
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to
study
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try
Correct word choice
and try

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hard
for gaining
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to gain

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the
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a

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higher degree.
consequently
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, everyone
as
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has

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different
capacity
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capacities

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in their
listen
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listening

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so
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exam
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exams

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could
a
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be a

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facility way that
student
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

show
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to show

It seems that the use of particle to may be incorrect here.

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their ability in
varieties
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various

The word varieties doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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Skill. It announces who
are
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is

The verb are does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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study
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studying

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tough during
education
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

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On the other hand
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, there is
fewer
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less

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evidence that
show
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shows

The plural verb show does not appear to agree with the singular subject fewer evidence. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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given
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that given

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exam
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

by
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student
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a student
the student

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it
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apply

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has
negative
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a negative

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impact because of mental pressure.
according to
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

the
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apply

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BBC
news
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News

The word news should be capitalized in this context.

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mor
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apply

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the
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apply

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50
percent
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per cent

The spelling of percent is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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of
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student
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students

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in
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at

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Teheran University
is
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are

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getting depression as
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exam
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the exam
an exam

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.
Therefore
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, most
of
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educational learner during their
study
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

the
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apply

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focuses on their test and get
pressure
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pressured

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in life.
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

as
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As

The word as should be capitalized in this context.

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a result some
of
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apply

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student
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students

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want to get
a
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apply

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higher
mark
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marks

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in the class and they
have competition
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compete

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together. They focus a lot
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on the

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the
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apply

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in
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on

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the test
a test
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the test
a test

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test
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as soon
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as thy
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as thy

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thy
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will get as soon anxiety.
To sum up
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

,
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exam
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the exam

The noun phrase exam seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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is
a
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the

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biggest part of
educational
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the educational

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system and it is
a
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the

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best
methods
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method

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to determine for talented
student
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

. It is very important to
education
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

learning
have
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to have

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test
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tests

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during learning because of select their level.
However
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, it has a fewer disadvantage
such
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

as getting mental pressure.

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coherence cohesion
Consider practicing writing structured paragraphs that clearly introduce, develop, and conclude your points. This helps in making your essay more organized and easy to follow.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words to show the relationships between ideas, but make sure they are used appropriately to avoid confusion.
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Develop a clear thesis statement in your introduction to guide the reader through your opinion and arguments. This will also help in keeping your essay aligned with the task requirements.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples to support your arguments. This strengthens your essay and makes your points more convincing.
task achievement
Work on producing clearer and more comprehensive ideas. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea, explained and supported in detail.
general
Consider revising grammar and sentence structures for clarity and fluency. Errors in these areas can hinder your ability to express ideas effectively.
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Enhance your vocabulary range by incorporating more precise and varied language. This will make your essay more engaging and demonstrate a higher level of English proficiency.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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