You live with a roommate at university but you have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate. Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include: -Who you are -The problem -What you suggest they do
Dear Mr Xasan
I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and in the best of spirits. Myself Akbar, a first-year student in the pharmacy department. Currently, I am residing in Carjon Hall and sharing my room with another student from the university. As I got admission at the last
moment so
I did not get the room in the Bpharm Hall. My roommate is from the English department.
Correct word choice
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To begin
with, I was not able to sleep properly the last
week, because my roommate watches movies late at night and the volume is high. Due to
lacking sleep, I am not able to concentrate on my study
and it is known Fix the agreement mistake
studies
to
Change preposition
apply
you
how much study pressure I Correct pronoun usage
apply
am
to take in pharmacy subject. Verb problem
have
Apart from
this
, I talked with the girl and she did not cooperate with me.
Hence
, it will be great if you come forward to tackle the situation. In addition
, you can tell her that she can use a headphone while
enjoying a movie as I do not have any problem with light. I await your response and let me know if you have any concerns.
Yours faithfully,
AkbarSubmitted by ina1_95 on
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Greetings and Closure
Ensure consistency in addressing the recipient, avoiding informal salutations in formal letters.
Structure
Provide a brief introduction at the beginning, clearly stating the purpose of your letter.
Tone
Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter, avoiding colloquial language.
Paragraph Organization
Use paragraphs effectively to separate ideas for better coherence and organization.
Task Response
Elaborate on your suggested solution, possibly by suggesting a meeting or proposing alternative accommodations if the problem persists.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite