The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The pictures featured above explain the way in which
sugar
is produced from sugar
cane.
Overall
, what stands out from the diagram is that it is a linear process that comprises several main stages such
as growing, harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporation, separating crystals, drying, and cooling.
The procedure commences when sugar
canes are grown for 12-18 months. After that, ripe canes are harvested with the help of both machines and farmers which is followed by the grinding up of sugar
canes in a crushing machine in order to make juice
.
After the making of juice
, it is placed into a limestone filter to purify to remove any residue. Following
this
step, pure juice
is then
poured into a cylindrical silo and heated by fire to evaporate it before the juice
becomes syrup
. In the next stage, the syrup
is then
placed in a machine with a rapidly rotating container, namely a centrifuge, in order to separate crystals from the syrup
. Ultimately, the syrup
is dried and cooled in a special container and the sugar
is ready for use.Submitted by writingbhos on
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