The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the city hospital road route has been replaced from 2017 to 2010.
Overall
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, the major difference between the old and new hospital structure is outside features
such
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as car parking, bus station and highway routes.
However
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, the healthcare facility is the same from the inside and surrounded by a ring pathway in the new plan the infrastructure has three entry gates one from the hospital highway and others are public and staff parking zones which are located beside the building area and in front of the building.
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, the bus stop which is situated in the east of the city hospital now moved to the west and in front of the staff parking area which is easily accessible.
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, the plan built the roundabouts which are situated in front of the hospital building.
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, separating the parking area will elevate the space for both the public and staff
this
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change is very crucial. Road access to the entry of the hospital is increased by upgrading the infrastructure.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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