Some people say that Art ( eg Painting, Music, Poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an opinion that just naturally talented people should make
art
, Use synonyms
while
others believe that Linking Words
art
can be produced by everyone. Use synonyms
Art
Use synonyms
as
any other profession should be Change preposition
like
tought
at Correct your spelling
taught
sought
unversities
, and it requires special skills. Correct your spelling
universities
However
, Linking Words
art
is still more about emotions and if Use synonyms
individual
can create something that provokes feelings they can surely call themselves Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
an artists
. In my opinion, Correct the article-noun agreement
artists
an artist
art
is for anyone who wants to express their emotions through music, painting or poetry.
Creating Use synonyms
art
is not as easy as it seems. One of the reasons for Use synonyms
this
is Linking Words
a
fact that every Correct article usage
the
art
specialization requires a lot of hard skills and fundamental theoretical Use synonyms
knowledges
. Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
For instance
, music universities teach students that already have at least 5 years of education at music school, anyone else Linking Words
do
not have a chance to get into the top institutes. Change the verb form
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Furthermore
, Linking Words
artist
should practice Add an article
the artist
an artist
everyday
to improve their ability to create.
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every day
On the other hand
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art
is still just pure emotions, Use synonyms
even
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and even
so
it Add the comma(s)
so,
usually
easier to achieve good results with special abilities, still there are self-thoughts that can make masterpieces without a background in Add a missing verb
is usually
art
. There are a lot of examples Use synonyms
for
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of
this
, like Imanbeak who won Linking Words
Grammy
for his remix, and he has never got a degree in Correct article usage
a Grammy
art
. Everyone should have a right to Use synonyms
tell
their ideas through Verb problem
express
art
.
In conclusion, it is easier to work in Use synonyms
art
with an Use synonyms
appropriet
academic background, Correct your spelling
appropriate
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however
it should not stop people from creating, Add the comma(s)
however,
hence
there is an artistic part in every person. In my opinion, anyone can make Linking Words
art
, they just need to understand what they want to say to Use synonyms
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