The graph below shows the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the spending on research into renewable sources of energy fell into four distinctive
countries
from 1975 to 2000.
Overall
, all four countries
, such
as Switzerland, Denmark, Spain and the UK, spent a significant amount of money on research into renewable sources of energy. However
; compared to other countries
, in the last
decades, from the graph, we can clearly see that researches
into renewable energy sources Fix the agreement mistake
research
of
Denmark and Switzerland has skyrocketed.
Taking a closer look at 1975’s Change preposition
in
its
crystal clear that, all Correct your spelling
it's
countries
began at zero dollars. After that
all Add a comma
that,
countries
increased by 1 dollar in 1980. However
; unfortunately, UK and Spain dropped in 1985. Moreover
, they were fluctuated
between 1990 and 2000; they couldn’t even make more than 1 dollar. As for, Denmark and Spain they were both increased all over the years. They started with 0 dollars, but they Change to the active voice
fluctuated
were
ended with approximately 3 and 5 dollars respectively.Unnecessary verb
apply
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