The graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales in 2002.
The line graph below illustrates the changes
Dubai's
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in Dubai's
gold
sales
during 2002.
It is clear that
the figures
fluctuated during the year before they levelled off in October. The highest figure was in March while
the lowest gold
sales
were in July and September.
At the beginning of the year, the figures
stood at 200 dirhams
in January and it slightly increased in February and reached roughly 225 dirhams
. By following
this
, the gold
sales
rose dramatically and reached 350 in March. After that, there was a significant drop during four months from March to July and figures
reached over 100 dirhams
. However
, in August the gold
sales
grew considerably approximately 200 while
dropped remarkably in September and reached again over 100. In October the figures
increased slightly and reached about 175 dirhams
after that, the gold
sales
leveled
off in the Change the spelling
levelled
last
two months and remained unchanged at roughly 200 dirhams
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