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The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The
table
 illustrates how many international
students
 study in
Canada
 and the United States by country of origin.
Overall
, the
first
table
 shows
index
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an index
the index
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 of
Canada
 and
second
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the second
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table
 shows the index of
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the Usa
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Usa
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USA
.
In each
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Each
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table
is shown
Wrong verb form
shows
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 three
country
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countries
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 and
total
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the total
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 results in 2002, 2003 and percentages of changes. The
first
table
 consists
countries
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of countries
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 of origin like
China
, The USA,
India
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and India
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 and the total results of these
countries
. 5,400 international
students
 were in
China
 in 2002 and 5000, 2100 international
students
 in The USA and
India
.
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In
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 2003 years the number of
students
have
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has
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 grown
up
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apply
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.
At
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In
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 the
end
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end,
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 the changes
shows
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show
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 good results. +17% was in the total. The second
table
composes
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comprises
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countries
 like
China
,
India
,
Canada
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and Canada
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 and the total result
as
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is
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first
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the first
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table
. The second
table
 has
same
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the same
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 requirement as
first
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the first
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table
 but consists
different
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of different
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countries
. Significative of
China
,
India
,
Canada
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and Canada
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 were 110.000, 200.000, 31.000 in 2002.
Number
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The number
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 of international
students
 in 2003 has grown in
China
 and
Canada
, but in
India
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India,
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this
 index decreased.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words table, students, canada, first, countries, china, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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