Some people think that the teenager’s years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

People feel various feelings in their lives. Some of them believe First Nation teenage eras

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more likely to be the cheerful period.

Therefore

, I agree with

this

nation. At

first,

being an adult does not mean people who never feel happiness again.

Firstly

, most adults start living alone since they have a job and can earn money themselves.

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although

there is some happiness and pride in success,

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also

there are several disadvantages

such

as less free time to hang on with your

friends

or less chance of taking a holiday because of your daily schedule.

In addition

, there are cases

such

as your

friends

don’t have

friends

to hang on with you because of their busy work .

Therefore

, they might feel lonely. In the next nation, we can say that the young era is the

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happiest period of most people’s lives because of 2 main factors. The crucial reason why they feel happiness in their teenage’s time is that they are still young and they do not have any serious problems or responsibilities as big as adults. Their focus is on school life and their problem

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only around love and

friends

.

Furthermore

, most of them get off from school in the afternoon so they still have much free time to do many things with their

friends

.

For example

, having a meal together after school or even going to watch a movie in a cinema. These bounding activities definitely can make them feel happy. In conclusion, a teenager's life is more colourful than an adult's. I,

therefore

, believe that the happiest times in life are when we are young.