At the present time the population of some country include large number of young adult compared with no of older people do ou think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

Social media is being used globally in order to stay in touch and obtain news. The author argues that the advantages of distant contact and simplicity completely outweigh the

disadvantage

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of

addiction

. It should be self-aware that the most significant benefit of using online communication

platform

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is the ability to connect regardless of distance. The Internet, in general, and online platforms,

in particular

, offer wide-scale contact

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therefore

, enable people to communicate via long distance. Viet Nam should be taken as a prime example of

this

application where most online calls are made from 30

kilometers

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away

in

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average.

Thus

, proving the usefulness of social media in terms of communication. Another point

that is

worth mentioning is the comprehensive and simple-to-use setting. Online

webs

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always get updated, but

instead

of complicating themselves, more instructions and even a virtual instructor are added

not to mention

those fabulous features and up-to-date events.

This

can be witnessed in the history of Facebook where new versions and updates were available every few days. Thereby, making these platforms even more popular.

Nonetheless

, some critics argue that the risk of

addiction

should not be ignored. It is evident that many teenagers and adolescents are suffering from Internet

addiction

as

this

can be regularly found in the news.

This

might be justifiable;

however

, with the help of numerous scientists and researchers, we are now capable of incorporating social media with real sports.

This

not only

help

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mitigate the risk but

also

alleviate

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the harmful effects of

addiction

. In conclusion, the merits of remote connection and easiness completely outperform the demerits of risk.

Hence

, utilizing communication via

Internet

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the Internet

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in different aspects of science is recommended.