Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say – Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished. – Suggest a future use for this building. – Recommend a way to raise money for repairs.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Amirbek and I am writing to request your assistance concerning the matter of the demolition of a historical building, located in my neighbourhood.
I believe that perfectly you can reject
this
project, which is about demolition.I must apologize for troubling you by taking up your valuable time. Let me explain this
situation, personally speaking, this
ancient building is very important for my neighbourhood. It included different types of materials. I think so, if your team demolish, these materials will be lost.
I would like to offer an idea about historical buildings. I would be grateful if you could consider this
suggestion. This
building is very old so we will repair it, instead
of, the act of destroying an ancient building. We should use it as a laboratory. To take an example, around the world, numerous scientists use different types of receipts. Admitted to, the receipt written by their ancestors. This
building also
has the necessary recipes.
I hope my request will not inconvenience you too much. I strongly believe that,
government the government does not always give money for reconstruction. We should make a project, which is suitable for raising money. Recently, I have heard that "OPEN BUDGET" supports financial aspect building or other something that will be useful in the future.
I am looking forward to receiving your prompt reply and adequate resolution in Remove the comma
apply
this
matter.
Yours faithfully,
AmirbekSubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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Task Response
For better task response, ensure all parts of the brief are fully addressed. Specifically, offer detailed explanations and examples for why the building should not be demolished, suggest specific and feasible uses, and provide clearer, more practical ways to raise funds for repairs.
Coherence
Enhance coherence by structuring the letter more logically. Introduce each main idea in a new paragraph to improve readability and the flow of information.
Cohesion
To improve cohesion, use a wider range of linking words and phrases. This will help connect your ideas more clearly and make the letter easier to follow.
General
Revise to ensure grammatical accuracy and appropriateness of vocabulary. Be mindful of verb tenses, word choice, and the correct expressions of requests and suggestions.
